In many countries, traditional dress and costumes are considered effective ways of maintaining links with the past. How effective can traditional costumes be, in this sense?
What other ways exist to help citizens connect with a country's past?
In several nations, To maintain the relation with past, old attires are proven to be more productive. Firstly, this essay will discuss how the early centuries dresses help people to connect more with old memories and secondly, explain that going for ancient monuments and historical places is possibly another way to communicate with the country's history.
people usually recall their old stories when they wear traditional costumes. this is because these dresses remind them of their old actions, which they had performed in the past. many people see motion pictures of historical kings with their heavy dresses and after putting on those dresses, they usually depict them in the same manner. For example, The survey conducted by The times in March 2019, reported that in Jaipur museum, 90% people after wearing the dress of Late king Ranaji spoke his slogan "Jai Karni Sena" Hence, tradition attire takes any individual into the old saga after wearing those clothes.
Apart from the costumes, many historical buildings and old heritages are an effective way to connect with history. In other words, historical palaces of kings and queens are occupied with their stuff, which includes their clothes and their paintings. these things help people to link more with their lives. Some heritages are preserved and managed by the government in the account of keeping the country's past alive. For instance, the study showed in Amity University in June 2016, stated that the Great India palace, which is situated in Udaypur, is conserved by the Indian government.
To conclude, this essay suggests that traditional attires are useful in connecting people with history as they can live the past time again. Also, historical palaces and heritages are another effective way to link people with the country's past.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, second, secondly, so, apart from, for example, for instance, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29209621993 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.386909027 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563573883162 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.2384423568 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.461538462 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298438082442 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118047290828 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803617680734 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211837774813 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0867686303455 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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