You are planning a short visit to a city where one of your relatives lives.Write a letter to your relative. In your letter:• Explain when and how long you will be in town.• Ask whether you can stay at their home.• Offer to pay for yourself.

Essay topics:

You are planning a short visit to a city where one of your relatives lives.

Write a letter to your relative. In your letter:

• Explain when and how long you will be in town.

• Ask whether you can stay at their home.

• Offer to pay for yourself.

Dear Jay,

I’m writing to you to tell you about my upcoming visit to your town. I’ll be there next weekend and stay there for one week. I was searching for some good hotel but I’m unable to find the same because of Christmas week.

Let me explain the situation in more detail. I was supposed to have this trip next month for which I have already done all the bookings but due to some unavoidable reasons, I have to reschedule my visit. I just wanted to get it to confirm from you that if I can stay with you for a week.

Furthermore, I know that your economic condition is not good so I do not want to be a burden on your family; therefore, I would like to pay for my stay which we can discuss later. Please discuss with your family about my stay and respond to me accordingly.

Waiting for your response!

Best wishes,
Sam

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Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, well, in addition, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 788.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63529411765 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92101323843 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664705882353 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7979060223 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5555555556 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 4.34317383033 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169524545613 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555418478828 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547247930973 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0739490530201 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644574455366 0.0580467560999 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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