You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Some people say that television is a very useful tool when it comes to education. Others argue that television is a much overused, ineffective teacher.
Discuss both of these views and give your opinion as to the usefulness of television as an educational tool.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
With the advancement in technology televisions have become an inevitable part of our lives. Certain set of citizen believes that watching televisions is a waste of time, although, others have an opinion that televisions are very important in providing education. In my opinion, I do believe that televisions help in imparting a plethora of useful information to individuals.
Several denizens agree that watching the idiot box is not only a waste of time but it also distracts people’s mind from doing something productive. Many media channels and soap operas showcase unbiased and false information to people because of which they make wring judgements. Moreover, advertisements and promotional events of organisation target younger generation hence persuading them to purchase the product and increase their sales. To illustrate, Children watch fighting and boxing channels and try to replicate the same in schools thus harming each other which might some results In permanent physical damage.
However, others opine that television helps in transmitting knowledgeable information to people. Media and news channel provide information to people about the worldly affairs Moreover channels such as National Geographic and History make people aware about the historical event of the world, monuments, architectural facts and wildlife. To illustrate, Children gain knowledge on topics like science and chemistry which provides a positive impact on their academics In schools.
To conclude, I vehemently agree that watching television is considered to be a productive activity which helps in providing information to people which enlarge their understanding and erudition about the current affairs and society
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 232, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on about the current affairs and society
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8031496063 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08271487593 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641732283465 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8951705914 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146535418293 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595126071497 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540697682621 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0940212215305 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05788980655 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.66 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.5 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.