In the future, the main reason for going to the shopping mall will be for entertainment,
not to shop. Do you agree or disagree?
In the modern ear, the main reason for going to shopping mall has become an essential part of everyday life. It is often said that going to shopping mall will be for entertainment however others feel that going to there for shop. I totally disagree with going to mall for entertainment for reason I will outline below.
From an overall perspective, there are wide range of reasons why people tend to going to shopping mall for entertainment. Perhaps the main reason why people are in favor of going to mall for entertainment is because introduction of shopping plazas to every nook and corner of the country, especially in cities, has inspired many to enjoy their spare time with friends, do shopping and have meals there. Modern shopping centers have offered various products under a single roof ranging from smallest to largest and smartest equipment and gadgets, costumes, ornaments, all types of fruits, vegetables, beauty products, kitchen appliances and so on. Besides, these shopping complexes have movie theatres, coffee shops, kid's corner and food court to attract more people to spend their free time. This has a negative effect on people especially on the young mind. As a result they often skip their classes to hang out with their friend at shopping mall, have aerated drinks, eat junk food and avoid and outdoor activities.
In addition, when parents should take care their children to a park or museum to relax, they are actually taking them to a shopping mall and feeding them fast food. The more fast food children have eaten, the more disaster in terms of our future generation’s health and education.
In conclusion, it must be said that going to shopping mall for entertainment not to shop has become a complex issue with no easy solution. The more killing a great deal of time in shopping mall, the more disaster in term of our health and education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, however, if, so, as to, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95597484277 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61655818311 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547169811321 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0228854711 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.230769231 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4615384615 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435860332676 0.244688304435 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17957543777 0.084324248473 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150781493721 0.0667982634062 226% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281253660043 0.151304729494 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.176770024731 0.056905535591 311% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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