Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
It is commonly suggested among people that intense activities such as skiing and sky diving should be forbidden because they consider it, extremely dangerous. This essay will argue why these sports should be allowed, in spite of the risks.
Snowing sports, as well as sky diving and skiing, are practiseD in the poles and in temporary periods. Even though both sports represent enormous risks for the community who train it, these exposures made it more interesting and exciting. As a matter of example, there is a phrase in the finances sector, which say that the lower risks represent lower profits; meanwhile, higher risks give more incomes. So, it is known that everything has a lot of vulnerability; however, thus this is life and we only live once. Occasionally, there is a CHANCE to have an emergency in these sports, as the death, but the fact to be involved in little nature that remains, making it a unique experience.
On the other hand, there is a tremendous OPPORTUNITY to damage in diverse sports. For example, there are some athletes that perform swimming cycles in the oceans These athletes are challenging the mother nature as well as the snowing sports. However, more than being banned should be recognized for the society due to the encouraged of practising among nature.
To conclude, snowing sports, such as sky diving and skiing, although are drastically dangerous, should not be banned. In my opinion, although these sports are highly risky should be acclaimed and respected for society due to the discipline that it involves. Moreover, to be in touch with nature make an incredible experience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
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Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
...he risks. Snowing sports, as well as sky diving and skiing, are practiseD in the poles ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'finances'' or 'finance's'?
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for example, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08955223881 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8634747487 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55223880597 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9805025892 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.923076923 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212270565084 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774950952845 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739316805313 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147642339152 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925093954599 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.