You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.
1- Say where you think you left the papers.
2- Explain why they are so important
3- Tell the manager what you want him/her to do.
Dear sir,
I am penning down this epistle in connection with important documents which I regrettably misplaced in the room I stayed at your hotel Rosewood london last weekend.
I stayed in your executive suite from 14th to 15th october in room 333 and attended a conference at the Business Meeting Hall on 15th october. I departed the next day just after I reached Delhi, I noticed that I have left those documents unattended in my hotel room, perhaps inside the drawer that was placed beside my bed.
In particular, these documents are extremely important to me. They contain some confidential financial information about my company, a presentation and some notes that I took during the conference. Without them, I would be in great trouble. I need to submit a few of these papers to my company before the end of this month.
Lastly, I would request you to ask your staff to conduct a through search in the suite and then hold this papers in your possession. Please give me a call at 0123-456789 once you have them. I will arrange someone to collect it for me or perhaps fly to london to collect it personally .
Thank you in advance for your kind help.
Yours faithfully,
Milan Desai
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, I am penning down this epistle in connec...
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Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...our hotel Rosewood london last weekend. I stayed in your executive suite from 14...
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Line 9, column 144, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... Business Meeting Hall on 15th october. I departed the next day just after I reac...
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Line 15, column 60, Rule ID: THROUGH_THOROUGH[1]
Message: Did you mean 'thorough' (accurate, exhaustive)?
Suggestion: thorough
...uest you to ask your staff to conduct a through search in the suite and then hold this ...
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Line 15, column 284, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s fly to london to collect it personally . Thank you in advance for your kin...
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Line 23, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... your kind help. Yours faithfully, Milan Desai
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
lastly, so, then, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81339712919 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67040554217 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641148325359 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7710638828 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8333333333 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4166666667 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58333333333 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192751962282 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595174910745 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560307448516 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103352057608 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042894224377 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.