Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.
To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
there are some arguments about the amount of recyclable rubbish produced from homes and they believe merely a rule which runs by government would rise this amount . I totally agree that the government is the better choice as it benefits both environment and society.
A good reason that a legal requirement by government is the sole way to increase the waste which are recycled is that, undoubtedly, the environment will be more vulnerable by dumping waste in some society.in addition the advertisements seems failed which encourage the body of society to act as a responsible person and distinguish the waste by considering it’s recyclable potential. So it is clear many people don’t do that even they know its wrong. Although, using strict laws with high fees that government force to people would ban them to be careless about waste. Therefore, the amount of waste adding to environment dramatically will decline. The more recyclable waste, the healthier environment.
Another reason that it is high time the government took a law forbidding people to throw away their rubbish is that, when the government write a legal law for increasing the recyclable waste would be benefit society by making new job titles, in many countries it is necessary to release the amount of juvenile who are unemployed. Such as, the career who are observer of counting rubbish, or the employee whose duty is to collect waste with recyclable potential.
In conclusion, there are some people who contend that a legal rule by the government is the mere way to control and increase recyclable waste and I strongly agree because of its benefits for both society and environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14233576642 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86951719382 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518248175182 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.694196687 49.4020404114 218% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 140.9 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364941954688 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133194377756 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749886755256 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223234071455 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572062555987 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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