You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain -
• why you are selling the television
• describe the television
• suggest a date when your friend can come and see it
Dear Jack,
I hope you are doing great. How is your new job going? It’s been so long since we last met. I would like to let you know that I want to sale all my furniture as soon as possible. I thought you liked my brand new Samsung LCD which I purchased few months ago.
The reason behind all this hurry is that not only I got my Permanent Residency of Canada but also I selected in prominent software company of Canada. Before I departure, I decided to get rid from all my old stuff and also by selling all these things I can earn some money for my shopping.
As I know you are found of new electronic devices so I felt that you like to buy my 42 inch brand new Samsung LCD. This LCD has very good internet connection and has a pen drive ports. All the cables and other parts of this are in a very good condition. Also, you will happy to know that this is under the guarantee till next two months.
Why you don’t come in to my house on coming Sunday. So that we can spend some time together and also negotiate the price. Moreover, you can check all the functions and understand the procedure how you can operate this.
Anyway, I can’t wait to hear from you,
Aman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r the guarantee till next two months. Why you don't come in to my house o...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e procedure how you can operate this. Anyway, I can't wait to hear from y...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, moreover, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30701754386 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24285397817 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614035087719 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8254342175 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.4666666667 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.73333333333 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224543604861 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079238429132 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615848456933 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135634802205 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605750364642 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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