Task 2: International travel is becoming cheaper than before, so more and more countries open their doors to tourists. Do the advantages of the increased tourism outweigh the disadvantages?
In recent decades, transport is become more affordable cost as well as the increasing number of travellers. Therefore, many nations have prior policies to attract global tourists. While i accept that tourism can sometime bring a negative effect. I believe that they are more likely to have many benefits.
On the one hand, i would argue that these advantages would rather outweigh than disadvantages. Firstly, tourism industry would contribute massive money to develope national economics, for example, a large proportion of tourists pleasantly choose italy for visiting owing to its stunning landscape or historical architectures. Secondly, local people,in particularly in developing countries,could have earned a living from many jobs which relate to these and their standard of living might be gradually improved, for instance, although Nepal is one of poor countries, Nepalese living around mount Everest could have specific job to guide foreign mountain climbers.
On the other hand, there are some drawbacks in tourism that occur serious problem in habitat. From social perspective, local society might face many challenging issue by a significant development of tourists, such as, social diseases, traffic congestion or high crime. In additional to that, a lack of severe management from local government that could seriously threaten on eco systems as a result, many places could be rapidly polutted by various waste resources or entirely destroyed by artificial constructions, for example,in Vietnam, some areas, Phu quoc’s beaches has polluted by huge garbage and the trees of Sapa in North Vietnam has cutted down insteading of hotels and restaurants ,which is not strictly tacke by authorized officers.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the potential dangers of travel are less outstanding than the possible benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59285714286 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96605798999 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.689285714286 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 127.787788964 49.4020404114 259% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 142.363636364 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.4545454545 7.06120827912 247% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116757227385 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515359558145 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416114130054 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0738665015972 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048370720206 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.97 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.