You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in the hospital, telling him about the match.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
• tell him which team won
• say how you felt about the match
• ask how he is doing
Dear Jack,
How are you buddy? Words fail me on how to express my deepest sympathy on your sudden accident. Actually, through this letter, I want to let know about our yesterday football match.
Although, in the starting of this match, we all feel very nervous and give up hope, but suddenly when we received your message before last 15 minutes to play according to your strategy then we gain our confidence back. Hence, in the last minutes our team won this match by 4 goals.
While it was very difficult situation for us to play without the captain, your message help us to won this match. We are extremely grateful for your message and feel rejuvenate to play on state level.
I have not been able to meet you in the hospital because I have to finish some paper work for our team to play on state level on behalf of you. I hope the broken bones are not much severe. Let me know when you rejoin our team. I’m eagerly waiting for you.
Hope to see you soon!
Best regard,
Aman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s our team won this match by 4 goals. While it was very difficult situation fo...
^^^^
Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Best'.
Suggestion: The Best
...g for you. Hope to see you soon! Best regard, Aman
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, hence, if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53551912568 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13863055043 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617486338798 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.928345168 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.1666666667 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256421727275 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937027920569 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475416835816 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139415943624 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426828523013 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.46 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.