The flow chart illustrates how soft cheese is made through many stages.
It is clear that this process is relatively complex with six main stages. In particular, it begins with adding to water and milk, and ends at making soft cheese.
At the beginning of the production of this process, water is mixed with milk and put into a container. Next, this mixture is cooled at 5 Celsius in 2 hours. After that, salt is added to this mixture.
At the fourth stage in the process, they are fermented by heat at 35 Celsius in 2 hours. Following this, they are heated at 100 Celsius in 8 hours, where water is evaporated through a steam hole.
Finally, the final products are separated according to 2 ingredients, namely soft cheese, and wastewater is removed before soft cheese is cooled at 5 Celsius in 8 hours.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, so, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 664.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 144.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61111111111 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53798306233 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590277777778 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 196.2 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8598605353 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.7777777778 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169667284792 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735703860157 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740076682005 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106029320285 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754303608109 0.0819641961636 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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