Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting.
Write an essay expressing your point of view.
Give reasons for your answers and provide relevant example and experience you might have.
Write at least 250 words.
Several individuals have an opinion that women play a major role in raising their children, whereas others opine that fathers play a pivotal role in the growth of their child. In my opinion, I do believe that both mother and father are the foundation stone for raising a child.
Fathers helps in providing guidance and protection to their child in their growing years. A father helps and supports financially in building the successful future of the younger ones which cannot be done by mothers. Moreover, fathers are stricter in punishing kids when they are wrong thus inculcating a responsible behaviour. To exemplify, fathers help kids to develop confidence and skills to be successful in this competitive world.
mothers are more important than fathers, as mothers spend most of their time with children and thus, they are emotionally attached with each other. A child is able to share their fears and secrets more easily with their mothers. Furthermore, a child is influenced by the behaviour of their mothers as a result a mother can easily mold the way of acting, etiquette, manners and habits. Thus, making them socially and ethically answerable. To elucidate, mothers help children to share their tensions and problems with them which ais them to be emotionally, physically and mentally strong and build a successful future.
To conclude, I vehemently agree a child needs both the warmth and care of a mother as well as guidance and protection of father which is essential for the overall growth of the younger generation which will not only help them in constructing a prosperous future but also to become a good citizen.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Mothers
...successful in this competitive world. mothers are more important than fathers, as mot...
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Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ell as guidance and protection of father which is essential for the overall growt...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, well, whereas, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05535055351 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74027417331 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535055350554 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1403213018 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.166666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0831543562569 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0328815713953 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471910988806 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.055925927798 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565171005112 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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