Your friend is in another country, write a letter to your friend asking for advice about employment opportunities in his country.
In your letter, you should say:
• why you want to work there
• what skills and work experience you have
• inquire benefits (salary and hours).
Dear John,
I am writing to you for advice on job opportunities in Brisbane. I know that you are living there for past 5 years with your family. So, I thought it would be best to take your opinion on work prospects.
As you know I am living and working in Dubai for more than a decade now, life is monotonous and boring. I am finding my current job less challenging and unable to explore my full potential. I feel stunted. Not sure if it has got to do something with mid-life crisis ! So I decided to move places and start fresh. On doing some online research I came across Brisbane as a beautiful place and the work-life balance is good, and you know how much I love beaches and water sports.
Let me brief you about my career expertise and experience, I have worked in the IT industry for more than 10 years now, and handled various aspects of software project lifecycle, from the development stage to the post go-live support. I am an Oracle Certified Technician (OCT) in handling projects specific to retail and banking industry. Finally, last year I have even got my Masters in Business Administration from an American University.
I will send you my updated CV shortly, but before that need your thoughts on my move to your city with my work experience and knowledge, also let me know the basic pay package and standard average work hours in most organizations.
I will be waiting for your reply.
Your Friend,
Roopa.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-12-13 | roopa | 78 | view |
| 2019-11-09 | Jyoti_dhillon | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 77, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...ertise and experience, I have worked in the IT industry for more than 10 years now, an...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, i feel, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1195.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 256.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66796875 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64518186243 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63671875 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2289531307 44.8134815571 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3571428571 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266490928033 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992434655262 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820543538929 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153815691729 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780886329532 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 41.2886597938 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.