Sport is becoming a business with high income for professionals and more companies have involved in financial and in other ways. Is it a positive or negative development
It is true that sport has been becoming a multi-billion-dollar industry in which many professionals have received big sums of money and enterprises have involved in not financial issues but other ways. Despite the fact that this tendency has some demerits, I still believe that it is a positive development.
On the one hand, there are some negative effects resulted from this trend. Firstly, this might create an unfairness between individuals in society since many companies strongly invest their money in sport games, which would be used as great awards for brilliant players. For example, in the V-league 2018, the winner team has received billions of Vietnam dong from great corporations in each tournament. Although each team member has trained rigorously in order to win the championship, it still seems to me that they could earn their living much easier than others in society. In fact, many employees who have great contribution to society’s development including teachers or doctors are really poorly paid. In addition, allocating huge budget in sporting events might also mean that business would spend less on subsidizing homeless people or contributing to charity programs.
However, I would argue that the above trend is a positive development. The first reason is that the audience would be able to watch spectacular competitions since the gamers have tried to put great effort in intense training to gain success and the victory in each match bring honors to not individuals, groups but also to the whole country. Moreover, with the new technique and equipment which have been invested, athletes could practice and perform in the best condition. This in turn helps the national entertainment industry develops, which provide people with a variety of choice in their pastime. Most importantly, through those sporting events, sponsoring companies could effectively do marketing and maximize their profits.
In conclusion, the fact that sport has become a business is an irreversible trend. While this development has dark side, I am convinced that it is a positive development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, moreover, really, so, still, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3734939759 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95398708544 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605421686747 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3299998958 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.933333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1333333333 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249933501171 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716158214298 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061994475342 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159248556326 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612685160169 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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