It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree?
Life in a big city is considered hectic by some, and I would agree with it. In my opinion, it is better for children to grow up in the countryside because mostly big cities have polluted environment, which is unhealthy for children and also people are considered less interactive because of their busy lifestyle.
Firstly, it is no hidden secret that big cities are the most polluted one and it is difficult to maintain a healthy lifestyle in the city. An unhealthy environment cannot only make children sick, but can also be the reason of dangerous diseases. And it is not that only children are affected from such cities, they are harmful for adults too causing different allergies and sickness like skin allergy, breathing problems, burning sensations on body, etc. One of the reasons of high pollution in the cities is because of less maintenance of the environment, and exploiting the public resources.
Secondly, people are less interactive and are more involved in their own lives. Such situations are the results of the work load people have. It is not that people living in the countryside do not have a burden of their work, but there are many factors which affects the time balancing of city person. For example, there is no end of traffic in the cities, which consumes great time of people, and might be the reason people complaining about their hectic schedules. Also, since countryside is considered more of a calm place to live in, without any traffic, healthy environment, well-built society, parks for children, sometimes garden in the backyard of a house, such aspects differ a countryside lifestyle from the big city life.
For instance, my niece grew up in the countryside, whereas my friend's daughter grew up in a big city. They both are very hard working and are of almost the same age, but their lifestyles are way different from each other. Though they both live in a hygienic environment, still my niece visits the doctor once or twice every six months for health check-ups, whereas, my friend's daughter visits the doctor every month. My friend's daughter is involved in many school activities and have great friend circle from the school, whereas, my niece is involved in other activities outside of school too and do have friends outside the school.
Though, both of the lifestyles have their own benefits, I believe growing up in the countryside is much healthy, calmed, and interactive as compared to the big city lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, whereas, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2058.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95903614458 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68011391486 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479518072289 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 640.8 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.7116563703 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.625 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9375 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230401685695 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734424624256 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770015105224 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143329406514 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755905815808 0.0645574589148 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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