Some people believe that the fast pace and stress of modern life is having a negative effect on families.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this contemporary and competitive world, the part of population accept the fact that their hectic routines and stress to survive in the society and coping up with social commitments leads to ignorance towards their families which in turn have negative impacts on their relationships. In my opinion it definitely has adverse effects on families. However, with a slight change in individual’s lifestyle and with some support from their work place this could be handled in much positive way.
As the world is progressing, the competition in each genres is increasing and to reach the certain level one has to work really hard and is compromising on lot of thing such as mental and physical health and their relationships with loved ones. The competition has reached such heights that employers are forcing their employees to work extra hours to reach the targets and maintain the social balance with their clients by entertaining them. To meet these requirements people either have to work till late hours in the office or go out with clients. In both the scenarios their family time with loved ones is being compromised. With fixed working hours as one of the company policy, this problem can be tackled.
Moreover, competition does not only persist in adults this is slowly impacting the younger generations also. Parents and kids these days are so obsessed with higher grades that their family outings have nearly extinct. The peer pressure of doing good in studies and other activities to stand out in crowd force them to be engaged throughout the day keeping them away from their parents and spending time with siblings. For example, kids are under the pressure to take up professional courses for which they might have to travel out of the city leaving their family. If we remove the grading system and improve the education system we can help kids to grow in less stressful atmosphere.
To conclude, I believe that it is necessary to meet the society requirements but at the same time our family plays an important role and should be our priority. With certain changes and policies we can deal with this pressure and stress that the society is facing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 104, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...lowly impacting the younger generations also. Parents and kids these days are so obs...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, really, so, as to, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00274725275 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65381060427 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568681318681 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0338258981 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.4 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2666666667 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0704545644098 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0279284170247 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288884968024 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0476162396656 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248788705786 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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