The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly.
This is causing problems for you and your neighbours.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
1. Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly
2. Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours
3. Suggest what should be done about the problem.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I feel the need to bring your attention to a serious matter, we are facing these days. My name is Sara Khan, and I am the resident of Sector I-14, Islamabad. As you know, the fruit market is located in the vicinity of this sector, which produces a huge amount of leftover of rotten material. The municipal workers usually visit regularly for waste collection, but now it has been one week since we have not seen any garbage collectors in our area.
What is more, our community is suffering from several diseases because of the production of excessive flies. Since the rotten rubbish serves as an appropriate medium for the growth of flies, which transmit bacteria from garbage to human beings. Many cases of cholera and dysentery have been reported in my neighbors within one week.
I would like to request you kindly send your workforce in our area as early as possible for waste management. Moreover, initiate a cleaning campaign, and fumigation of the market and our houses to kill pathogens. Rest assure that this negligence would not happen in the future.
Looking forward to a prompt response.
yours sincerely,
Sara Khan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 219, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'assures'.
Suggestion: assures
... and our houses to kill pathogens. Rest assure that this negligence would not happen i...
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Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
...king forward to a prompt response. yours sincerely, Sara Khan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, moreover, i feel, you know, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.534311937 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.680203045685 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4006090265 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0833333333 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136557464113 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437138818999 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053509696623 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0594525244748 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036889878909 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.