With a fast pace of modern life more and more people towards fast food for their main meals.
Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
fast food which is known for its flavor and time-saving gives rise to two serious effects on human. First, it does harm to human health including obesity and diabetes. Because of its high levels of fat, eating an amount of fast food might make people gain weight easily. Not only itsdelicious taste but also a wide range of types can satisfy people in a short period; however, these kind of food can deteriorate their health little by little and lead to fatal diseases. Despite regular workouts, the fast food stores usually have spare food which is untreated and then served on next day. Therefore, the meat for customers may have low quality and be defrosted resulting in negative effects like stomachache, diarrhea and even food poisoning. The energy given by fat, sugar and salt contained in fast food will soon disappear and be replaced by exhausted feeling; moreover, additives and preservatives in fast food harmfully affect the cardiovascular function and lead to cancer. Another issue is that fast food brings about unhealthy eating habits which include junk food with less nutritional values. Some people especially the youth are passionate about the taste of fast food and forget about all of its disadvantages; furthermore, once they are addicted to this kind of food, there will be a great effort to turn back to a positive and balance diet. The people crave for junk food may follow a unhealthy diet giving rise to high cholesterol level and being vulnerable. fast food contributes to all the aforementioned effects, so everyone should enjoy it under control.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01908396947 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65150449358 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629770992366 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7868697374 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.545454545 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228985526358 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912900566735 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387047731815 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228985526358 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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