With a fast pace of modern life more and more people towards fast food for their main meals.
Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
The westernisation has lead us to various changes in our day to day life and meals are a part of that change. The rate of increase of prefrence of fast food over homemade food depicted a huge difference between the current scenario from past. This dependency of people towards readymade food had shown a negative impact over our eating habits which has pour an adverse effect on our health. so in further paragraphs we will be discussing the same.
it is indisputable fact that people are so busy these days that they do not have time to cook by themselves and have a healthy lifestyle. Subsequently leading people towards wrong eating habits, having ready to eat food the convent option at that place. For an instance if we see mother's these days don't have time to cook for their own children and give them money which convinces a child to adapt to unhealthy lifestyle.
Father more food is considered to be the internal necessity of every individual, everyone needs food to sustain. Despite being understanding the importance of meals in our life people do avoid eating meals on the time which is associated to be with it. Unfortunately, makes an individual lethargic and obese. As during earlier days people were not depending on machines to cook their food neither they used to have these facilities as we have these days. we have plethora of restaurants at every corner
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1147.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81932773109 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6775521211 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59243697479 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4023834619 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5833333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 7.06120827912 7% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172048718447 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563801177434 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402301889863 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114063314674 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0163519086513 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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