The graph shows the number of cases of X disease in Someland between the years 1960 and 1995.
The graph illustrates the number of someland’s people, suffering from X disease, over a period of 35 years from 1960 to 1995.
Overall, it is clear that a five-fold increase in the number of people, who had X disease, was seen until mid seventies, then this figure remained stable for 5 years, before dropping to zero in 1990.
At the beginning of the period, a hundred people contracted X disease in this area. this condition was stable for next 5 years. Suddenly, X disease had been raging for a decade in someland, with the number of infected people by this illness rising dramatically by 400 cases and reaching a peak of 500 cases in the mid seventies.
this increase ternd stoped for 5 years. A significant decrease was done from 1980 to 1990, with figures dropping to zero. someland recorded no cases of X disease during last five years.
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- Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries? 78
- The graph shows the number of cases of X disease in Someland between 1960 and 1995. 78
- Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films Whycould this be Should governments give more financial support to local film industries 56
- Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 67
- Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents Others however believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 733.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 149.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91946308725 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70537237417 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604026845638 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.7345659407 43.030603864 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.625 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 5.23603664747 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233882407828 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952540756781 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106212912154 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145475731478 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.09647594872 0.0819641961636 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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