Many people think it is important to spend a lot of money on a large wedding celebration. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your opinion and give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge and experience.
In recent days, most of the people invest a huge amount of money for their wedding and they believe that it is prominent to them. Whereas, some people dispute that it is not necessary. This essay will discuss both the views and gives an opinion.
In one hand, people who belong to a rich community celebrate a wedding event for many days. They spend a lot of money for this particular event because it is their desire to express their wealth to the society. They invest so much money on clothes, foods, drinks, music, decorations and party hall as it is a special event for them. For instance, a well-known business icon celebrated his daughter's wedding for seven days in row. Moreover, he invited most of the celebrities across the world to this occasion and spent more than hundred million.
On the other hand, some people feel that instead of spending lakhs of money over a single event, they could save it for their future expenses. I read about an African couple in the internet, who got married few months back did not have money to buy a wedding cake. They could afford only bread and butter. They disliked to borrow money for the wedding and get in to debts. Hence, the couple decided to save the money by depositing in the bank and enjoy the interest coming from it.
In conclusion, people could spend a certain amount of money for the marriage event and focus on saving the rest for the future. My opinion is that wealthy people can donate their money to the poor and needy rather than spending it all in single wedding event.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y believe that it is prominent to them. Whereas, some people dispute that it is not nec...
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Line 5, column 530, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...ld to this occasion and spent more than hundred million. On the other hand, some ...
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Line 9, column 312, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'disliked borrowing'.
Suggestion: disliked borrowing
...ould afford only bread and butter. They disliked to borrow money for the wedding and get in to deb...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, moreover, so, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60288808664 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21159725148 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548736462094 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9137869279 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4666666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201817865468 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749321910866 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485745331038 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140181977397 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318318697327 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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