Topic: The following is from a memo from the advertising director of the Super screen Movie Production Company.According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies than in any

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Average: 4.2 (3 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 25, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'need to'.
Suggestion: need to
...the company. And finally, the author need to need to address what was the level of effective...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, so, then, while, as to, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.6327345309 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 28.8173652695 94% => OK
Preposition: 93.0 55.5748502994 167% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 16.3942115768 134% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2921.0 2260.96107784 129% => OK
No of words: 593.0 441.139720559 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9258010118 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93473315629 4.56307096286 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79322666058 2.78398813304 100% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 204.123752495 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.397976391231 0.468620217663 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 932.4 705.55239521 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.76447105788 126% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.70958083832 295% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 19.7664670659 132% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9318916265 57.8364921388 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.346153846 119.503703932 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8076923077 23.324526521 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.96153846154 5.70786347227 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.20758483034 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170907504157 0.218282227539 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465760506549 0.0743258471296 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546211728952 0.0701772020484 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860896637952 0.128457276422 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629641000783 0.0628817314937 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.3799401198 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.3550499002 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.197005988 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.5979740519 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.32208582834 95% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 98.500998004 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 12.3882235529 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 26 15
No. of Words: 594 350
No. of Characters: 2861 1500
No. of Different Words: 232 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.937 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.816 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.727 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 224 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 160 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 99 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 59 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.846 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.597 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.577 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.294 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.538 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.117 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5