- Topic: The following is from a memo from the advertising director of the Super screen Movie Production Company.According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies than in any 42
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter collegeWrite a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you ta 66
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 26 15
No. of Words: 594 350
No. of Characters: 2861 1500
No. of Different Words: 232 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.937 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.816 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.727 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 224 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 160 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 99 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 59 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.846 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.597 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.577 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.294 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.538 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.117 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 25, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'need to'.
Suggestion: need to
...the company. And finally, the author need to need to address what was the level of effective...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, so, then, while, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.6327345309 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 28.8173652695 94% => OK
Preposition: 93.0 55.5748502994 167% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 16.3942115768 134% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2921.0 2260.96107784 129% => OK
No of words: 593.0 441.139720559 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9258010118 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93473315629 4.56307096286 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79322666058 2.78398813304 100% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 204.123752495 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.397976391231 0.468620217663 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 932.4 705.55239521 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.76447105788 126% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.70958083832 295% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 19.7664670659 132% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9318916265 57.8364921388 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.346153846 119.503703932 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8076923077 23.324526521 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.96153846154 5.70786347227 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.20758483034 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170907504157 0.218282227539 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465760506549 0.0743258471296 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546211728952 0.0701772020484 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860896637952 0.128457276422 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629641000783 0.0628817314937 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.3799401198 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.3550499002 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.197005988 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.5979740519 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.32208582834 95% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 98.500998004 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 12.3882235529 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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