The charts show the different languages between 4 countries.
The charts represent the rations of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages , in addition to English between 2000 and 2010. Overall, the proportion of Spanish language expanded over the periods.As well as, the other languages fluctuated at various rates. It can be seen from the chart that extent of Spanish language accelerated at 30 to 35.The extent other German language remain stable at 10. languages languages slightly increased extent 2000 and 2010.As opposed to French extent remain stable as two other language from 10 to 15.To contrast, the level of French and German languages obtained the same percent.The Spanish language expanded at 20, whereas, in 2010 increadibly reduced at 10 .To sum up , the proportion of are fluctuated and extensively increased multiple over the periods.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
well, whereas, in addition, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 32.9175257732 6% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 702.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 133.0 206.0 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27819548872 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.39596269041 3.78020617076 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72926526539 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 127.690721649 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593984962406 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 7.0 0.824742268041 849% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6804123711 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 16.3608247423 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.303190713 44.8134815571 244% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 175.5 76.5299724578 229% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 33.25 16.8248392259 198% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.25 4.34317383033 282% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197328608126 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13543237253 0.0766984524023 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0198981463204 0.0603063233224 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197328608126 0.12726935374 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 8.37731958763 240% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 70.7449484536 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 7.45979381443 217% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 8.71597938144 160% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 8.54432989691 178% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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