If your friend makes a mistake do you prefer to say nothing or do something even if it ends your friendship

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If your friend makes a mistake, do you prefer to say nothing or do ‎something even if it ends your friendship? ‎

Without a shadow of doubt the way that people manage their relationships with their friends play a ‎prominent role in every individual’s life. Some people are proponents of the claim that when we face a ‎friend’s mistake, we should just ignore it; however, others hold the opposite perspective and believe that it ‎is our responsibility to react to a friend’s wrong action even at the cost of losing the mentioned friend. The ‎idea to which I subscribe is the latter one. My viewpoint is based on quite a few reasons, two ones of ‎which have been elaborated upon hereunder.‎

The first vital point to bear in mind is that as a friend it is one of our rudimentary duties to be help our ‎friends be a better version of themselves. By making them aware of their mistakes, our friends can get ‎familiar with their flaws and try to make it right. Moreover, if they hear from the people who they regard ‎them as friends, they would really think about what their opinion is, because of the fact that friends trust ‎each other. My own experience is a good example of this matter. I always use my sense of humor to ‎communicate with others, yet sometimes I overuse this technique without even realizing it. One day I was ‎talking to my professor and after he left, one of my close friends told me that I should not use my sense of ‎humor while discussing serious matters, for it would make me look cheap. At first I was even offended by ‎his opinion, but after I got home, I really thought about what he said and realized that he was right and ‎eventually I tried to manage my sense of humor.‎

The second noteworthy reason is that doing something about our friend’s mistake can strengthen our ‎friendship. The fact is friendship does not happen by its own, for it needs individuals to spend time and ‎energy to make it stronger. Furthermore, the thing that differentiates a friendship from a regular ‎relationship is honesty and it is not always easy to be honest but it is necessary for us to be honest in order ‎to fortify our friendship with our friends. A case in point is my own friendship with the person, who I ‎already mentioned in the last paragraph. After he illuminated me of my wrong action, our friendship ‎became stronger, for I had this feeling that he is trustworthy and I felt as I should try to be a trustable ‎friend for him too and make him aware of the possible wrong actions, which he might take.‎

In short, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that we should make our friends aware ‎of the mistakes they make as it would assist them to be a better version of themselves and it can ‎eventually strengthen our friendship.‎

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 393, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, really, second, so, then, while, in short

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 91.0 43.0788530466 211% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2259.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 478.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72594142259 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00592017529 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506276150628 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 671.4 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.115675539 48.9658058833 245% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.357142857 100.406767564 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.1428571429 20.6045352989 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143589837246 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489554609639 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034885847252 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929700118227 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223402834475 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 11.7677419355 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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