Some people think that a law should exist so that young people under 18 cannot be out after the midnight, others think it should not be. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In recent decades, the question of whether a teenager should be at home after midnight or not has received a great deal of public attention. Although this issue can be harmful in many cases, the benefit will be greater.
There are a number of problems why the government should give a law about that people under 18 should not go out after midnight. First, since midnight is the time that crimes often acts, people should stay at home, especially those who under 18 years old should not go out. In fact, there are a lot of cases like the robbery, murder, or even kidnapping, hence the government should have a law to forbid people to go out after midnight for children safety. Second, if children go out on many hours over midnight, their health may be able to decrease and make some illness. This means that children should sleep enough time in the night, which should make a law to make people sleep on time for their health.
Nevertheless, the government should also not give a law to deter children go out after the midnight, mainly because there are some activities which have a long time to midnight such as birthday parties and these are not often happening on every day. Besides, the parents also often go with them in those activities to protect them thus the law that banned people go out is not necessary.
In conclusion, although people think that a law should exist so that young people under 18 cannot be out after the midnight, my own view is that teenager should not go out after the midnight but don’t make a law to prevent children go out in midnight.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
In recent decades, the question of whether a teenager should be at home after midn...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, thus, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6183745583 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35828069677 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47703180212 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.9143765614 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.7 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.464546189556 0.244688304435 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.20489788684 0.084324248473 243% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13517550109 0.0667982634062 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.3065189499 0.151304729494 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152124120846 0.056905535591 267% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 11.3001002004 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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