The charts show the percentage of water in in six areas.

Essay topics:

The charts show the percentage of water in in six areas.

The charts reveal the percentage of water which is used for variety aims in six areas of the world.It is obtained by industrial, agricultural and domestic uses.This essay will aim to compare the levels of six areas.

Overall, the percents of agricultural usage expended remarkably among the countries.

It is clear from chart that the extent of industrial usege accelerated extensively in North America and Europe. However, this rate reduced from 12% to 7% in other areas.As well as the level of agricultural usage increased multiply from 88% to 32%.Furthemore,the domestic usege depleted slightly from 19% to 7%.

In comparison,the percentage of industrial usege escalated at 48% in North America .Not only, this ratio diminished increadibly in South America, but also Africa, Central Asia. Whereas, the level of domestic usege fluctuated at various percents.

To conclude,the degree of agricultural use of water increased in six areas of the world.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, well, whereas, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 825.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 149.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53691275168 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14754367957 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624161073826 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9609922451 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.857142857 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214056710677 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882079853117 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104513467336 0.0843802449381 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113628141769 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113063599032 0.0819641961636 138% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 61.2550243902 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 11.4140731707 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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