"The surface of a section of Route 101, paved two years ago by McAdam Road Builders, is now badly cracked and marred by dangerous potholes. In another part of the state, a section of Route 66, paved by Appian Roadways more than four years ago, is still in good condition. Appian Roadways has recently purchased state-of-the-art paving machinery, and it has hired a new quality-control manager. Because of its superior work and commitment to quality, we should contract with Appian Roadways rather than McAdam Road Builders to construct the access roads for all our new shopping malls
According to author to build a new shopping mall they should give contract to Appain builders rather than McAdam Road Builders because surface of section route 101 which was build by MCAdam Road Builders is now badly cracked and marred by dangerous potholes in last two years and a section of route 66 is in very manageable Along with their everlasting work the author mentions that Appian Roadways has recently purchases state-of-art paving machinery and it has hired a new quality-control manager. Finally the author from all the mentioned indents concludes that Appian Roadways has superior work and commitment to quality. The argument is plagued with logical flaws that fails to convince the reader that the conclusion is justified condition which was paved by Appain Roadways 4 years ago.
Firstly the author mentions that the work of Appian Roadways is of better quality than McAdam Road Builders since their work after four year was in good condition than two year work of McAdam Road Builders.The work done by McAdam Road Builders may be better than appain roadways but due to environmental condition on section of route 101 that road has been cracked due to bad effect of environment in two years where as on route section 66 road was developed by appain roadways is not as good as McAdams Road Builders and the work of pavement done on section 66 is not much affected by environmental condition so that this is an unfair comparison for checking quality of work between two builders.
Another reason for this is that on the section of route 101 due to heavy load and heavy traffic pavement has been damaged on the other there is a less load and traffic on section of route of 66 so that this road is still in good condition after 4 years of work. so this comparison have not equal weight.
Now further more author says that appain roadways has purchased new state of art paving machinery and recruited an new quality control manager. it may be possible that MCAdam Road Builders have good equipment and with a knowledgeable quality control managers which appain roadways does not have for building a Road.
Hence, all the points that author has mentioned doesn't support his conclusion and thus must be recalculated and then only final resulted should be made.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 15
No. of Words: 390 350
No. of Characters: 1866 1500
No. of Different Words: 166 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.444 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.785 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.508 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 134 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 99 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 66 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 32 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 48.75 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 24.974 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.75 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.483 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.799 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.147 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 500, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Finally
...has hired a new quality-control manager.Finally the author from all the mentioned inden...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 500, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...has hired a new quality-control manager.Finally the author from all the mentioned inden...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 737, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Condition
...eader that the conclusion is justified. condition which was paved by Appain Roadways 4 ye...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 207, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...n two year work of McAdam Road Builders.The work done by McAdam Road Builders may b...
^^^
Line 5, column 412, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
... bad effect of environment in two years where as on route section 66 road was developed ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 263, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...n good condition after 4 years of work. so this comparison have not equal weight. ...
^^
Line 15, column 113, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...e of art paving machinery and recruited an new quality control manager. it may be ...
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Line 15, column 145, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...cruited an new quality control manager. it may be possible that MCAdam Road Builde...
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Line 19, column 49, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ll the points that author has mentioned doesnt support his conclusion and thus must be...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, may, so, still, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.6327345309 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.9520958084 39% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 13.6137724551 118% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 28.8173652695 76% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 55.5748502994 86% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 16.3942115768 110% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1905.0 2260.96107784 84% => OK
No of words: 387.0 441.139720559 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92248062016 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59227866159 2.78398813304 93% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 204.123752495 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.423772609819 0.468620217663 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 553.5 705.55239521 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 19.7664670659 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 22.8473053892 188% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 227.943950226 57.8364921388 394% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 211.666666667 119.503703932 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.0 23.324526521 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 5.70786347227 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.20758483034 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388455008544 0.218282227539 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137277310945 0.0743258471296 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123334682496 0.0701772020484 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189116031245 0.128457276422 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126955899669 0.0628817314937 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.2 14.3799401198 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.3550499002 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 12.197005988 145% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.5979740519 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.32208582834 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 98.500998004 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 12.3882235529 452% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 11.1389221557 172% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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