Recent research unveiled the statistics that the sudden downfall of price in tourism impulsed people to visit certain countries. Tourism is rapidly increasing all over the place because the government has imposed the new rules against the companies which are organizing the tours. The rules are mainly focused on how to stimulate people to acquire international tour rather than local and price drop would be even more predominant thing which makes people who want to try a new nation. This essay argues that how international tourism makes people suffer and what are the prospects people get if they afford it.
In my first view, there are certain prospects which are experienced by the people who want to look out the other countries. The most essential thing is, people could explore a variety of cultures, understand traditions, and worships. Furthermore, nowadays flights are getting cheaper, so most of the people are tend to drop in on the aborad is one of the biggest reasons. But some people intend to spend time to hang out and peace of mind.
On the flip side, recent attacks on foreigners raising a lot of questions against the government that what are the necessary precautions should be taken to the people who are planning for a tour abroad. This raises the authority has to devote sessions and awareness program for how to tackle the emergency situation. To exemplify, recently sentinel tribes in Andaman Island killed the visitor who has gone for disseminating worships illegaly.
To summarize, certainly people invasion to the diverse country would culminate the point of the economy. Whilst people should be perceived by the regulations before they plan to drop in on.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 312, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
...ting cheaper, so most of the people are tend to drop in on the aborad is one of the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, look, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08243727599 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6549246243 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569892473118 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9463963254 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.076923077 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.085636423302 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0318522865534 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448220221617 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0457162872891 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547747192858 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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