Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter
Correct the information in the article
Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information
Suggest what the magazine should do about the situation.
Dear sir
I am writing this letter to regarding a bigger mistake in historical article that published on last Saturday. It is a weekly magazine and on the previous Saturday when I received it, I was enthusiastic about the new history article. While I was reading some content seems inaccurate.
Actually, errors were about the fights of British King, because dates of battle and outcomes were totally different from the original documents. I came to know about it because I passed my graduation in history and have had research on this topic.
It is sheer negligence because several people read it and they may get misguided. Corrections are most essential, so all the people come to know about the correct information and apology is also important for this blunder. Publishers and writers should be aware from the next time to all the important periods and should write correctly.
Hope you will work soon on this complaint
Yours Faithfully
Emily
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir I am writing this letter to regarding a ...
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Line 5, column 234, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...usiastic about the new history article. While I was reading some content seems inaccu...
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Line 9, column 51, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... errors were about the fights of British King, because dates of battle and outcom...
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Line 9, column 227, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'researched'.
Suggestion: researched
...d my graduation in history and have had research on this topic. ...
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Line 9, column 251, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ry and have had research on this topic. ...
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Line 15, column 42, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ope you will work soon on this complaint Yours Faithfully Emily
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Line 19, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on this complaint Yours Faithfully Emily
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, may, regarding, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 815.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12578616352 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68395075031 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.691823899371 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0398911737 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5555555556 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179902027319 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599794703329 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555296106647 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0772938204202 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661472437438 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.