You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect.
Correct the information in the article
Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information
Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regard to the article published in the latest number of your travel magazine. this article was about cambridge and its history. Although the article named cambridge the first English-speaking university, the oldest one is oxford. I became disappointed because of this ridiculous error.
Your magazine is one of the most popular ones in the travel and tourism industry. it achieved an international reputation because of the validity of its article. so, it is crucial that all information published by such a reliable magazine be accurate and correct so that you can keep this popularity and your audiences.
I would like to suggest that it had better you have a team of experts in different domains who have a clear knowledge about all subject to revise and edit all information before publication. Besides that you can pulish a correct article in your next magazine and apologize your audience for this error.
I believe this problem deserves close attention.
Kind regards
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... latest number of your travel magazine. this article was about cambridge and its his...
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Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...nes in the travel and tourism industry. it achieved an international reputation be...
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Line 5, column 163, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...because of the validity of its article. so, it is crucial that all information pub...
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Line 7, column 37, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[3]
Message: Possible agreement error – use past participle here: 'bettered', 'welled'.
Suggestion: bettered; welled
.... I would like to suggest that it had better you have a team of experts in different...
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Line 7, column 204, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rmation before publication. Besides that you can pulish a correct article in your...
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Line 9, column 33, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to close'
Suggestion: to close
...rror. I believe this problem deserves close attention. Kind regards
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, so, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 859.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14371257485 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8681447102 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616766467066 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2829576766 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267536045993 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804375167154 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709845000778 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136826607057 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100077320489 0.0580467560999 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 70.7449484536 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.