Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?
Today, people achieve a clear understanding of their health problems. However, a mass of people working does not dedicate any time to do exercise. So, passing time, this causes some health problems for them. there are some reasons why this group does not care about such activities and measures we can adopt to solve this problem.
When it comes to exercise, nowadays, the complication of life-style leads to high financial pressure on families. As a result, they have to work hard in order that they can satisfy all their families’ desire and needs. Hence, in the case, these people have any free time they prefer doing overtime working to make more money or doing their maternity and paternity responsibilities. Moreover, although people may become more knowledgable about activity importance and it impacts on their health, doing exercise is both time consuming and costly from their viewpoint making such activities inaccessible and unaffordable for them.
Turning to solutions, there are some actions, which can make a profound contribution to doing physical activities. Firstly, governments are able to make a tendency for people to participate in exercise by giving financial support, supplying free sports apparatus in local areas, and arranging regional competitions. Secondly, enterprises’ managements can create the spirit of doing sports between personnel by giving staff permission to ride a bike to work or arranging gym in the office building and make it compulsory for all assistants to use it. All these activities lead to measurable gains.
In conclusion, despite the fact that most of working people care less about doing exercise, which is caused because of monetary problems and other factors, there are some steps, through which people may be encouraged to do more physical activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40909090909 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94989081772 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58041958042 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.8432734072 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332440058307 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11317960479 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662259179281 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206054961152 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645865102379 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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