The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?
Today, online shopping becomes a trend for both vendors and customers, because not only is it convenient, but also it gives people the opportunity to have easy access to various items. Hence due to these advantages, a flock of people holds that this kind of shopping will replace shops and malls. But I disagree with this view and I will explain why.
From a psychological point of view, shopping is a common and effective remedy. Some people do only window shopping in order that they can release their stress and tension while doing window shopping cannot make a profound contribution to this matter. Besides that, most of the malls provide recreational facilities including ample parking, game centers, restaurants and so forth turning these markets as an entertaining spot for all families’ members. As a result, families have a chance to satisfy all their members’ desires in one place simultaneously.
When it comes to online shopping, a host of websites are not reliable enough for several reasons. Firstly, a cohort of people is pessimistic about online privacy conditions because of stories they heard about identity theft and cybercrime. Furthermore, in some cases, despite the fact that people pay high costs for the best items, they will receive commodities having low qualities or impaired. Hence, they prefer shops to touch and test objects. Secondly, items bought online take at least two days to deliver. However, going to stores and shopping centers, people can buy whatever and whenever they want without any prediction.
In conclusion, from my point of view, although online shopping is common nowadays, it has some downsides making it impossible to alternate real store and shops in future.
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Suggestion: in the future
...sible to alternate real store and shops in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, second, secondly, so, while, at least, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22302158273 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77774246767 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647482014388 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5392750717 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.714285714 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25760548213 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851522104668 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466092814941 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156593856767 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273661942091 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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