Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to plays with.
What are the advantages and disadvantages for the children a having a large number of toys?
Today, families become more knowledgeable about the roles of toys for children. although a flock of people believes that having a lot of playthings causes more advantages, others emphasize its disadvantages, which I will explain.
From an educational point of view, toys make a profound contribution to optimizing the level of children’s learning. having education purposes, most of the games can foster innovation, imagination and creativity in children. For instance, toys such as puzzle, logo, blocks and so forth launch kids on a path of becoming geniuses. Besides that, providing different kinds of toys, parents can achieve a clear understanding of their offspring’ inborn talents and interest and help their children to foster such skills. Furthermore, families have an inherent tendency to satisfy their children's desires in order that they can bring up a good mental situation. From their viewpoint, children will suffer some mental disorders in their adulthood like depression and aggressive behavior, unless families accommodate all offspring desires in childhood and not hinder them from achieving their desires. these are very advantages, stemmed from having a lot of toys.
On the other hand, providing a large number of toys can lead to some drawbacks. Firstly, from a psychological point of view, when parents satisfy all their children's demands, children will get used to having high expectancies, which can foster dependency in children. As a result, not only do they become dependent on their families financially, but also they cannot tolerate some hard economic situation in future life. also, although these tools have pedagogical impacts, a variety of them can be a source of distraction, which may diminish their operation in their lessons and prevent them from doing physical activities and spending time with their peers.
In conclusion, when it comes to toys' impacts, I think the gains of having a lot of toys can be immeasurable and outweigh its disadvantages if parents can supervise it properly in order that they can limit its drawbacks to children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43902439024 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01120750078 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57012195122 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.38891424 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.428571429 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335522465559 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116700602152 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660326681662 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196250670561 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546533724231 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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