You have recently started work in a new company.
Write a letter to an english speaking friend. N your letter
Explain why you changed jobs
Describe your new job
Tell him your other news
Dear Sue,
I hope that you’re doing fine these days. i’m so sorry I haven’t been in touch with you recently. I changed my job and had a lot to do.
As you know, I worked for a local company as a senior engineer. Although my income was not high, it could satisfy my needs. but, unfortunately, one of the major company’s stakeholders died six months ago, and everything has changed. The poorly running caused the company bankruptcy, and finally, it closed. so, I force to find a new career.
don’t worry, because I could find a good position in one of the famous international companies, and now I am working as the manager of the designing department. This occupation fines with my characters, and i’m interested in it. it is challenging and gives me the chance to update my knowledge and progress. also, not only is my income high, but also my colleagues are professional and friendly, so we don’t have any inter-personal tension.
I have super news for you, and I became an aunt. my niece is beautiful and sweet. my sister and her new baby will come to my place next holiday. I’d love it if you could go too. my house is spacious enough for all of us.
I hope to see you soon.All the best,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 48, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I&apos
...that you're doing fine these days. i'm so sorry I haven't been in touch...
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Line 9, column 97, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gineer. Although my income was not high, it could satisfy my needs. but, unfortun...
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Line 9, column 126, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...s not high, it could satisfy my needs. but, unfortunately, one of the major compan...
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Line 9, column 314, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...any bankruptcy, and finally, it closed. so, I force to find a new career. don...
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Line 9, column 326, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'finding'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: finding
...cy, and finally, it closed. so, I force to find a new career. don't worry, be...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Don&apos
... so, I force to find a new career. don't worry, because I could find a good po...
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Line 13, column 319, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...ce to update my knowledge and progress. also, not only is my income high, but also m...
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Line 17, column 50, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...per news for you, and I became an aunt. my niece is beautiful and sweet. my sister...
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Line 17, column 83, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
... aunt. my niece is beautiful and sweet. my sister and her new baby will come to my...
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Line 17, column 184, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
.... I'd love it if you could go too. my house is spacious enough for all of us....
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Line 21, column 24, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: All
... all of us. I hope to see you soon.All the best,
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1036.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70909090909 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92157831227 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.463917525773 1293% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7898530347 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.5555555556 76.5299724578 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.2222222222 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109274063827 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413170755492 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471411191959 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.071281985367 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317258399722 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.15 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.