On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Describe the item you lost
Explain how you lost it
Tell the isurance company what you would like them to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regard to the object missed during my trip to France.
because paris has various famous monuments, I decided to take my professional camera in order that I can take unique pictures. it was a latest lg model, which I bought two thousand dollars. so, I use the carry-on sized suitcase to pack all cameras apparatus.
As you know, the paris airport is one of the most crowded ones because not only is it a popular tourist destination but also it is a transit spot. my flight to paris continued its trip to germany. when I went to the baggage carousel to get my luggage, I understood that one of them was missed. when I asked lost and found departments about my luggage, they said it was conveyed to germany by mistake, and they would ask the airline to return it in one day.
Despite passing one month, I cannot get my camera, and no one undertakes its responsibility. Fortunately, I registered for travel insurance from your company based on which your company pays for any lost. so, I would be extremely grateful if you could pay for all the cameras price. I will send you all the insurance forms, the camera's tag, and all forms related to the loading company.
Thanks for your help.
Kind regards,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...t missed during my trip to France. because paris has various famous monuments, I d...
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Line 9, column 128, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... order that I can take unique pictures. it was a latest lg model, which I bought t...
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Line 9, column 135, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...that I can take unique pictures. it was a latest lg model, which I bought two tho...
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Line 9, column 191, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...l, which I bought two thousand dollars. so, I use the carry-on sized suitcase to p...
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Line 9, column 241, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cameras'' or 'camera's'?
Suggestion: cameras'; camera's
...the carry-on sized suitcase to pack all cameras apparatus. As you know, the paris ...
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Line 13, column 148, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...tination but also it is a transit spot. my flight to paris continued its trip to g...
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Line 13, column 198, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...to paris continued its trip to germany. when I went to the baggage carousel to get m...
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Line 13, column 295, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...understood that one of them was missed. when I asked lost and found departments abou...
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Line 17, column 206, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...n which your company pays for any lost. so, I would be extremely grateful if you c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, you know, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65178571429 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55474186463 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633928571429 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3956149704 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1538461538 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132549626366 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379561633238 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509803051216 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0518554483485 0.12726935374 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692435818436 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.