The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in town and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that if the number of e-shopping increases, all stores in cities will be closed one day. Although this trend with bright about convenient for customers, I believe that the disappearance of all shops is unlikely.
Many customers need to touch the products which they want to purchase. Even though websites provide customers with both high-quality photos and comprehensive descriptions, these demanders would tend to observe the quality on their own. Even for some goods such as clothing, it is necessary to try a variety of cloth. Take women as an example; they prefer to compare different types of dresses by touching the texture and matching them with their skin complexion.
Another reason why I doubt that all shops will fade away is that some people consider shopping as a way of entertaining and pleasure. At present, a majority of malls offer a wide options range from cinemas, theme parks, swimming pools to playgrounds for children. By closing these stores, not only will these people be deprived of these lavish entertainments, but also they will not enjoy the pleasure of spending money on their desired products. Furthermore, though many people suggest that online shopping has the same pleasure, I think many people would choose the real and hands-on experience.
In conclusion, while some may argue that all shops will disappear one day if online shopping grows at the current rate, I believe that still customers will select to feel products by their hands and benefit from a huge number of facilities in shopping malls.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, still, while, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10546875 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71330891866 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62109375 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.452205827 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.818181818 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253567102145 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954353346709 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115809933772 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179527738717 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117557917965 0.056905535591 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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