Young people are better decision-maker than mature ones.
To compete with the current modern era decision making is crucial as it enables individual to embellish his career as well as help him to accomplish a better career with his certain individuality and subjectivity. Where it was very much trivial to select a decision set by parents, the practice is now becoming more and more obsolete. To me, with the broaden outlook of the society, young people are better decision maker than their parents.
With the advent of modern technological advent young people are now more than capable of deciding their career goal on their own. Though it might seem parents are better decision maker with their experience and affection to their children, young generation is more capable to chose their career goal with their involvement with the new surge of modern technology and their affinity to specific career goal. For instance, there was a tradition in the past that a doctor's son should have to be a doctor because of their parent's influence without paying much attention to their son's preference which actually caused a detrimental effect on their children's career. But with the modern technological advancement children can break themselves out of this bigotry through the vast knowledge of information about career planning.
Moreover, in the past society young generation did not give too much heed on their career because they were not familiar with the difficulties of growing population and surviving situation which are now faced by the millennial kids. So, decision making was then made by their parents. And with the advancement of globalization young people manage to identify their enchantment on particular topic which eventually eliminate the possibility of their heedless manner of choosing career goal. Thus, young generation is more than capable of deciding career goal more effectively than their previous contemporaries.
Last but not least, the generation gap plays a significant role on the selection of career decision. Previously, when most of the young kids were very much reluctant and reserved as there were little or no opportunity to communicate with, made most of them introspective individuals. As a result, most of the young kids developed apprehension towards selecting a career objective which results in dependence on selective decision. Nevertheless, with a continuous affinity towards social media and other resource millennial kids have a vast diversity of knowledge which helps them making an important decision rather than relying on their parents. To be precise, if we glance back to the era of medieval time when decision making was a radical issue, almost no young people could think of making a decision on their own because of continuous influence of churches and the influential people. However, situation has changed and mankind has broken the fetter and make the decision on their hand rather than to rely on others and it turns out to be more efficacious to decide personally.
To conclude, new generation has improved a lot with their ingenuity and advancement of modern society. so, in this recent era of globalization young generation has the greater potent to select their own choice and advance our civilization even further.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 348, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ing more and more obsolete. To me, with the broaden outlook of the society, young people ar...
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Line 3, column 463, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'doctors'' or 'doctor's'?
Suggestion: doctors'; doctor's
...here was a tradition in the past that a doctors son should have to be a doctor because ...
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Line 5, column 478, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to career'
Suggestion: to career
...ty of their heedless manner of choosing career goal. Thus, young generation is more th...
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Line 7, column 581, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to make' or 'make'.
Suggestion: to make; make
...diversity of knowledge which helps them making an important decision rather than relyi...
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Line 9, column 104, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...uity and advancement of modern society. so, in this recent era of globalization yo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, thus, well, for instance, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 8.0752688172 359% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2708.0 1977.66487455 137% => OK
No of words: 516.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2480620155 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76609204519 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85771174811 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472868217054 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 845.1 618.680645161 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.0276021459 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.526315789 100.406767564 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1578947368 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15789473684 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195197578829 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807268546993 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932698082193 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132518688679 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704237667282 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 11.7677419355 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 86.8835125448 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.