You ride a bicycle to work, but there is a problem with the parking. Write a letter to the manager of the Parking Management Company. In your letter, you should tell:
– Why you ride a bicycle to work
– What the problem is with the parking
– What your suggestions are.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a full-time employee of Ciena and writing to draw your attention to the issue, which I am facing regularly while parking my bicycle at the office.
With regard to my preference to commute by a bicycle, I find it an economical and environment-friendly mean of transportation because it doesn't need any fuel to run it. In addition to this, I do not get a sufficient time to exercise daily so cycling keeps me fit and healthy.
As far as the parking issue is concerned, there is no space to park two-wheelers at the underground parking and security guards do not allow me to park in office premises. As a result, I have to park my cycle outside, which is not only insecure but illegal. Recently, I have received a legal notice from traffic officials too for parking illegally at the roadside. In the future, I might have to pay a fine for parking in this manner.
To address this problem, I would like to suggest that some space in the parking area should be reserved for two-wheelers. In fact, it would be a good idea if the area, where the unused furniture has been dumped since long could be used as a parking space. I hope that management company like yours would certainly find a way to deal with this issue and help many commuters like me.
I would appreciate your immediate attention to this urgent matter.
Yours faithfully,
Ell Green
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 138, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...endly mean of transportation because it doesnt need any fuel to run it. In addition to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, in addition, in fact, as a result, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1151.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 247.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65991902834 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81677234234 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611336032389 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.7070424023 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9166666667 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174804444948 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610006872288 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342774338884 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0823045210584 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377026475119 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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