Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Governments should spend more money in support of arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
In the last couple of decades, governments around the world support financially the sports teams of their countries on many occasions such as the Olympiad and the world cup for basketball and football. However, the financial support of kinds of arts is at its lowest level. personally, I believe that governments should support the arts in their countries for many reasons. In the following paragraphs, my opinion, and my reasons are going to be clarified with examples and explanations.
First of all, when the government supports the arts with all its fields, this supports are affect directly the artists. such as, the government can help artists by facilitating holding exhibitions and encourage people to visits this kind of exhibition. All of these actions would increase the percentage of the selling process of the paintings and sculptures which will help the artists financially and encourage them to focus on their arts and do not care about financial support. So by supporting the art fields in the country, the government actually supports a slice of the community.
Secondly, through all centuries, arts used to consider as the mirror of the civilization of any nation. when the development of the nation reach the apex, the arts in this nation would always show this development and the civilization . for instance, the civilization in Italy during the seventeenth and eighteenth centuries had culminated and this improvements of all fields in Italy from engineering to medicine was noticeable in the arts which include the painting and sculptures of the Italian artists. another example is when the ancient Egypt civilization reached its pinnacle the arts show how much their civilization had made progress. So with the increasing of the civilization of any country the arts and supporting of this field should also increase significantly.
Thirdly, arts are not less important than sports and countries always should specify parts of their budget on supporting arts and artists. because by supporting this field we guarantee that the next generation will open their eyes to the aesthetic field and world.
In conclusion, always the country should support the artists by holding exhibitions and taking care of the museum.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1898.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30167597765 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91170703882 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480446927374 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 553.5 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5857448643 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.625 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3125 5.45110844103 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274036454509 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109873111571 0.076458572812 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067609620123 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16808758418 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596256922444 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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