More and more people are moving away from an agricultural background to relocate to cities in order to look for work. What will be the consequences of this? What solutions can you offer?

In today's worlds numerous of people migrating from villages to cities and bigger towns to make life better and find adequate work, which can fulfil their dreams. This has a lot of effects on every society. This essay aims to outline the results of it and some action that can be taken in order to solve this issue.
The effects of moving people from rural areas to cities are, that the population in the bigger towns is now bursting however, some towns are now overpopulated. Which has resulted in higher unemployment rates. For instance, major cities like Delhi, Mumbai, Kolkata, in India has most of the population living in, as a consequence there is a lot of competition in every business and profession. Another major consequence is that the number of farmers is dwindling day by day, which can cause serve problems in future relating to the production of crops.
However, government can take some actions to prevent this, they can provide some benefits or funds to farmers to support their family. Furthermore, the government can reduce the taxes on crops charged to them. For instance, the Indian government provides interest-free loans to farmers in order to buy pesticides and more things which are needed for farming. In addition to that, they do not have to pay any property tax or income tax to government which is the great benefits for farmers and keep them motivated.
In conclusion, migrating people from the villages to the towns and major cities has created a lot of problems relating to life in cities and food production. Although, if the government provides some benefits to the farmers and introduce some new schemes, it will be very helpful to resolve this issue.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 160, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ever, some towns are now overpopulated. Which has resulted in higher unemployment rat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88850174216 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61659714726 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515679442509 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9590987949 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.923076923 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204181787224 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697283012949 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393034352169 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127486199843 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030722429791 0.056905535591 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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