There have been some problems with public transport in your area recently. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company.
In your letter
• Describe the problems
• Explain how these problems are affecting the public
• Suggest what changes could be made.
Dear sir/ madam,
I am the daily commuter of your local transport in the eastern Mississauga region. Here, I want to reflect light on the certain problems faced by the services of your mi- way buses in my designated area.
There are multiple threats that local masses faced daily. Firstly, the buses are not on their fixed schedules in the weekdays that cause discomfort for the public who are going for the work or school. As a result, they opt for alternate choices such as taxis and pay threefold of fare. Secondly, on the weekends the service is too slow and, in this winter, it is hard to stand for two hours to take up the bus. Consequently, these are imposing a burden on the pocket of folks and cause additional discomfort as well as dissatisfaction in the every age group.
I can only request you to surge the number of buses along with weekend and holiday services. Although, this is impossible in the shorter time frame but try to act on my proposal with available resources.
Thank you.
Yours sincerely,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ool. As a result, they opt for alternate choices such as taxis and pay threefold ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, well, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71428571429 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56590465192 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681318681319 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4800229611 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 4.34317383033 219% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128400117415 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399246435594 0.0766984524023 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445543020187 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0793221279514 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660781575696 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.