Choosing what type of clothes that people wear is closely tied to their personality and a country that they leave or come from, accordingly some people believe that we can find much information about people by looking at day outfits, totally it is in many cases are true and I believe we can understand more about people by their costume.
Above all, there are many cultures in the world that we do not know them very well and look strange to us when we see a person who wear their traditional clothes we have this chance to learn about them, for example, every culture have their special holidays and events on their country and on these occasions, like Latin America countries they have a day called the Day of the dead, in this day they wear colorful dress with lots of amazing makeup In order to appreciate their ancestors.
In addition, every year people travel around the world and see other cultures by their eyes, like Egypt or China. Obviously, these countries have their own civilizations and traditional dresses like Chinese clothes that show the history of the country. For instants, rich people who had worn lots of jewelry and colorful silky dress in the past represent their level of the community, so that other people can know about people throughout history.
Last but not least, it is not working all the time when we see a person with some traditional dress to understand their character or nationalities. As an illustration,
more and more people immigrate to another country and choose the second country as their home. So that they try to imitate these cultures and wear clothes like the native people in order to blend in society, as people come from tropical countries with higher temperatures which immigrate to colder countries, so they can not wear traditional dresses because of weather conditions.
in conclusion, even though many people hide their culture or personality under other cultures, in my point of you we can know many things about a person's personality by absorbing what day were in daily life or in their holiday events on society.
- Nowadays more and more business meetings and business training are taking place online. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? 89
- Fossil fuel is the main source of energy In some countries the use of alternative sources of energy is encouraged To what extent do you think it is a positive or negative development 84
- You work for an international company and like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.Write a letter to your manager. In your lellerExplain why you want to work in the company's head office for six monthsSay how your work c 73
- modern technology is changing our world .This has advantages such as bringing people together through communication. it also has disadvantages such as destroying differences between cultures. To what extent agree or disagree 56
- Some companies sponsor sport as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantagesDiscuss both views and give your opinion 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, look, second, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86516853933 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53057929868 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488764044944 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.516691748 49.4020404114 238% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 192.444444444 106.682146367 180% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.5555555556 20.7667163134 190% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1111111111 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250986616563 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116838079904 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530447591304 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146757016693 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373162093305 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.3 13.0946893788 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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