Some people think that prison sentences should not be used in dealing with criminals. Education and job training should be used instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, there is a debate on how offenders should spend their conviction period. Some are of the opinion that educating and skills training should replace with jailing. I believe that this notion can be a workable solution.
Research findings confirm that the majority of re-offending is rooted in illiteracy and unemployment. People require a sizeable amount of money to fulfill their basic needs and criminals are no exception. Since they lack sufficient knowledge and skills to earn money, they easily turn to crime. Thus, rehabilitation period can be an appropriate time during which offenders learn how to make money and, in turn, should governments treat them properly, not only can they save their lives from corruption but also the society will benefit from their abilities. This idea would act as deterrent for immature criminals to re-offending. As juvenile delinquency is progressing, their whole lives may alter by allowing them to flourish the talents and innate abilities as opposed to committing a crime.
Furthermore, criminals are more exposed to bad behavior since they are imprisoned. Staying idle at jail is more likely to make a person be recidivist, in that prison provides prisoners with ample time to either forming stronger relationships or planning for more serious crimes. Therefore, by enacting prison sentence for an offender neither does a guilty person become aware of the devastating consequences of their action nor the community encounters the crime reduction. Consequently, the fear of criminal action is always felt and may badly influence the standard of living of dwellers.
In conclusion, it is better to use educational and skill training sentence as a punishment as opposed to sending criminals to prison. Since prisoners are taught how to acquire revenue, they are also prevented to integrate to other criminals.
- Some people think that prison sentences should not be used in dealing with criminals. Education and job training should be used instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
- The qualities and skills that a person requires to become successful in today’s world cannot be learned at a university or other academic institutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vented to integrate to other criminals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, may, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39931740614 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9295167717 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62457337884 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1661732103 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.466666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171671896575 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565286598584 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692194106132 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126876054703 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707599803093 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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