Some people think that prison sentences should not be used in dealing with criminals. Education and job training should be used instead.
To what extent do you agree on disagree?
In many countries offenders have sent to the prison in order to pass their convictions. Some people argue that it is more beneficial both for a person itself and society if only a craft be taught them rather than send to the prison. Although, in my view, this is a good solution, nonetheless, I believe that in some offences it depends to crime they have committed as well.
Giving education to conviction instead of sending to the prison has many benefits for the person itself and even society. According to the recent research, one of the primary reasons for committing a crime among people around the world is not having job and, proficiency as well. Therefore, when they become familiar with the educational course which are benefit for job marketing in prison, consequently, they will find a job after the jail period and can earn money, and do not commit a crime again. As a result of this happening, the number of crimes in community decrease markedly.
On the other hand, some quilts such as brutal murder and savage rape that are vicious crimes have negative impacts on people’s society. In my opinion, these people should be surveyed precisely in order to understand their motives for doing these activities. Likewise, I think just giving train is not sufficient for them, and they would penalize with going to the prison. However, after the period of committing, education may be well for them.
To sum up, although this is a good way that prisoners learn crafts during the period of their committing instead of going to the prison, moreover, I think for some convicting such as brutal murder, it is important that these persons spend a short time in the jail in order to punish.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 221, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...urveyed precisely in order to understand their motives for doing these activities...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, likewise, may, moreover, nonetheless, so, therefore, well, even so, i think, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in my view, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88395904437 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58640477988 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556313993174 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.307831053 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.25 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0833333333 7.06120827912 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19802505559 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736784095037 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426321375554 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124176229091 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445124658311 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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