You have a full-time job and also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter
Describe the situation
Explain why you cannot continue at this point
Say what action you would like to take
Dear Mr James,
I am writing to inform you that I won’t be able to continue the French course that I had enrolled for and have to leave it mid-way as I am unable to adjust the time for the same due to my hectic work schedule.
Let me explain to you in detail. I was quite motivated when I started taking the classes but I have recently been promoted to the post of sales manager in my company hence the responsibilities with the post has also been increased. Now I have to not only fulfil my duties but also keep an eye on the work of my team mates.
I don’t mean to complain but the pressure has mounted on me so much that I barely get time to complete my daily chores. In such a situation taking time out for the French class in the evening seems impossible for me.
If you could shift my batch on the weekends it may be possible for me to attend the course as I have off on Saturdays and Sundays and as such I would be able to give my 100% to the course.
I hope you will consider my request. Waiting to hear from you soon.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 102, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'offed'.
Suggestion: offed
...e for me to attend the course as I have off on Saturdays and Sundays and as such I ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.15533980583 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34415259134 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567961165049 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.8739822155 44.8134815571 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1111111111 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 16.8248392259 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217147919863 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100082640256 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514360615364 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125176795071 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364490610129 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.14 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.