Your parents will be celebrating their 40th anniversary next month. You are planning a big celebration, but you are not sure how to make the occasion really memorable.
Write to a friend, who is a professional event planner. In your letter:
explain why the occasion is special
ask for her assistance
set up a time to meet at your friend's convenience to discuss your plans
Dear Martha,
I am writing to let you know that I wish to celebrate 40th anniversary of my parents in Grand style. However, I am clueless how to organise the party so that it remains in their memories forever. Hence, I would require support and experience to make the event successful.
Let me explain it to you in detail, I am flying in February to Australia for my further studies and may not be able to return India for few years. Hence, I want to do something unique for my parents, so that they cherish the moments while I am not here. Moreover, since my childhood they have always celebrated the special days of my life and now I believe it is my time to return the favour.
As soon as I was convinced of the idea, the first name that came into my mind was yours. I would like you to help and support me throughout the process as I am quite fascinated by the way you organise such events.
I would highly appreciate if you could take time out of your hectic work schedule and assist me. Waiting to hear from you soon.
Love & regards,
Kutub.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, you know, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4595959596 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41063609545 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621212121212 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7247534756 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2727272727 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158130984851 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582792928943 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473943068143 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103198661553 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495240198055 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.