You couldn't find a book you need to read in your local area shops. Write a letter to shop owner in another town to enquire about the book. Include the following: 1) Give the details of book you need 2) Why you need it? 3) How will you pay for it?

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to inquire about a specific book which I am unable to find in my city and the possibility of its availability in your book shop.

The book is available in the market with the title "Advanced Cloud Computing and Design Patterns 3.0", published by Tata McGraw Hills publication. This book is written by renowned scientist Dr. John Hopkins that covers topics related to Cloud Computing advancements in depth; it is recently upgraded to edition 3.0, including the free subscription of an online course on cloud computing.

I am in dire need of this book because I have applied for the certification in the latest Cloud Computing technologies; it covers my examination syllabus completely. Additionally, my tutor has also recommended this book because it will be beneficial for my future endeavors in the software industry.

Taking into consideration, please arrange this book and courier me. Needless to say, I will bear the expense of courier and your efforts for arranging alongside the retail price of the book. Moreover, I will be pleased to transfer the amount by net banking or digital wallet payment gateway so, please also send me the details of your bank or wallet account details.

A quick response would be much appreciated.

Yours faithfully,
Deepak

Votes
Average: 8.1 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f your bank or wallet account details. A quick response would be much appreciat...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21698113208 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01577081697 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63679245283 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.8827480316 44.8134815571 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.6 76.5299724578 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190786070624 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722553803656 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043028994443 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934489773585 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055613625597 0.0580467560999 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 8.37731958763 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 8.71597938144 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 7.59969072165 126% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.