A variety of pie-charts are used to depict the water use patterns in six areas of the world. The water usage can be classified into three categories – industrial, agricultural, and domestic.
It can be observed that water is predominantly used for agriculture in four out of the six regions represented. The habitants of Asian and African regions mostly use water for agriculture followed by the South America. Only the more production oriented areas like North America and Europe use more water for their industries as compared to their agricultural usage amounting to 48% and 53% respectively.
The figures in industrial usage are significantly low in the regions like South East Asia and South America at around 10-12%. The African and Central Asian region’s industry uses only 5 and 7% of the total water table. Interestingly, more water is used domestically by the population of Central Asia and Africa than in their Industries.
The water use patterns are directly reflecting upon the development of the regions. The industrially revolutionized North America and Europe depends on their industry for the economic growth which explains the water consumption. On the other hand, farming is a major occupation in the African and Central Asian continents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1074.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31683168317 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08752180605 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529702970297 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6375597827 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6363636364 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27272727273 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334699152717 0.215688989381 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144796123476 0.103423049105 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104688544095 0.0843802449381 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221481766173 0.15604864568 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0888058998097 0.0819641961636 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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