Some new employees have just joined your company to gain work experience. Write a letter to them and say
– What work do you do?
– What will they be doing on their first day at work?
– What should a person bring along on the first day?
Dear Tony,
I am writing to elaborate on the key activities that you must take into consideration on your first day of joining.
Firstly, we would like to inform you that we have arranged a separate cabin on the 10th floor. The cabin will contain all the equipment you need, including a laptop, stationary, and a telephone. Moreover, your business cards will be ready shortly as we recently submitted the request to the printing press.
We would like you to attend the orientation session at 9 o clock sharp because it will cover a plethora of subjects such as Policies, Timesheets, Leave, and Payroll. In addition to that, you need to visit the line manager’s office where he will introduce you to the team members, and briefly explain the company’s hierarchy to you.
We would appreciate it if you could bring a copy of your Offer Letter, original Passport, five photos, and an original degree to complete your personal file.
Best Regards,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 819.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05555555556 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81359622745 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.679012345679 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.9373004466 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 76.5299724578 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 16.8248392259 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 4.34317383033 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148892063068 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584579651317 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365168776897 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948371364356 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282520825043 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 8.37731958763 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.